Review: A Concert for Christmas by Helen Hawkins*

*I received a copy of this book in eBook format via NetGalley in return for this review. All reviews published on Yours, Chloe are completely honest and my own, and are in now way influenced by the gifting opportunity.

Title: A Concert For Christmas
Author: Helen Hawkins
Genre: Holiday Romance

Trigger warnings:  Car Accident, Miscarriage (Second Trimester), Bullying

Rating: 

Schoolteacher Sophie Lawson has fled to the Cotswold countryside after a tragic break-up and is throwing herself into dating and organising Cranswell’s annual Christmas concert. The festive fun is marred by the arrival of a handsome but surly musical director, tricky pupils and concert preparations falling into disarray. Disaster strikes, but the show must go on. Will the concert bring Christmas harmony to Cranswell and will Sophie end the year on a high note? 

A Concert For Christmas is the debut novel from author Helen Hawkins and a cosy Christmas contemporary romance set in the fictional Cotswold market town of Cranswell. It’s an easy read which you could fly through in a day and great if you like books with a cosy community theme.

I want to preface this review by saying that I did want to like this book. I always try to support new authors and hate having to give negative feedback on a debut book where possible. But, although it did have some strengths, I largely didn’t get on with A Concert For Christmas and hope that this review explains my reasoning for this well.

To start with the things I enjoyed about the book, I did really like the cosy small-town setting of Cranswell and it was nice to meet the different inhabitants of the town. A particular shoutout goes to my personal favourite character: the eccentric Lulu. The focus on the choir and their Christmas concert felt lovely and festive so it was a great setup for a cosy Christmas novel.

Sophie was a nice-enough protagonist. She made me laugh at times and it was sweet how much she cared about everyone around her. I liked following her day-to-day life as a primary school teacher and thought this was a nice touch as primary schools can be lovely – yet busy – places to work over Christmas. The trauma she has following her miscarriage and subsequent relationship breakdown was largely well written also. However, I was absolutely infuriated by her for dating the parent of a child in her class. I am an ex-teacher and that is a total no-no, particularly in the way Sophie went about it. She was over-familiar with Liam’s daughter Cassie and it just all completely went against teacher professionalism. I also didn’t like the relationship between Sophie and her mum. I appreciate that difficult parent/child relationships do exist but this felt too much and it seemed unrealistic that Sophie’s mum would run a charity supporting those who have experienced child loss yet be completely oblivious to how Sophie was struggling.

The primary issue with the book is Liam’s character. He treats Sophie really poorly and is blowing hot and cold throughout the whole story so it really hard to root for their romance. All I wanted was for Sophie to run for the hills. I appreciate that something could be said for Liam’s untreated trauma following the death of his wife but if anything, he needed therapy not a new girlfriend to take on the brunt of his trauma responses. It was extremely difficult to celebrate a HEA between them when we’d seen awful anger issues in Liam that had not been addressed.

Unfortunately, I did find the narrative structure difficult to engage with also. We had frequent chapter breaks in the middle of scenes and chapters repeatedly switched focus between our two POVs – Sophie’s and Liam’s – and this overall just made the narrative feel really disjointed and difficult to follow.

Overall, this book would be good for anyone wanting a easy-read Christmas book with a small-town setting and community feel, but it just wasn’t for me.

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